Wow hun again another emotion filled poem form ya. i love readin your work. keep it up loves ya always crimson-pain xxxxxx |
Wow, Awspme poem. I loved it. Has some good emotion within. kepp up the good work. |
by why me
Dang.........your good you now how to put it out there......she should forgive you nice poem |
I read this and sort of imagined a little boy at the window saying the words. It's quite sweet I guess. The ending is quite comforting, but I think you could've endowed on this alot more. Your lines are very basic and the beginning is a bit melodramatic for my liking. I do like the ending alot though. Nice work. |
Neo, I liked this poem. Although..regreting what you have done isnt goinjg to solve much. You must tell him/her how you feel and make it alright between you both. If the person doesnt understand, give that person space to think. Nice work overall. |
by Sami
Awesome poem man |
DAMN UR REALLY GOOD WHEN I PUT SOME POEMS ON MINE PLEZ CHECK THEM PUT |