The love that i die for....

by free-spirit14   Dec 20, 2005


Love is the strongest of energies,
i breath in time with the desire,
i realize my love is in danger,
just because this force does not fit.

The times we tried to bring it together,
the times it still fell apart,
now i wonder if it's meant to be,
or just one of loves sins.

I tried to fight for it,
but the truth began to die down,
you became heartless and worthless,
the cold nights i now lay alone.

I remember the times;
The bitter sweet taste of your lips,
the relaxing touch of your stroke,
that convincing smile and spirit.

Are those the reasons why i left?
Because you could not love any more,
i figured there's a wall,
that won't let me in.

These words that i now write,
will be the last,
if u can't love then i can't live,
the emptiness has left me hanging.

No choice, no more,
there is never an answer to love,
or anything simple about the emotion,
but i know people die for it.

Like me.......

Please vote people and write your comments, I'm a beginner to this and need some criticism!

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  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    Yea i agree people die for love... but not like that... i would die with my love... but not because my love left me...
    anyways... really expressive poem~
    -kelsie