by Puerto_Rican_Chick Dec 20, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
For all the tears that i cried it's all been because of you, but not tears of hurt or anger... or even being confused. you've made me cry happy tears... sometimes i cry because of pride, because im confident that i'll be happy cause i have you in my life. |
by pseudo
I think this is a good poem.. i think you spoke how you felt pretty well the only thing is just work on the structure of this poem thats pretty much it.. i liked how you just wrote down what you felt.. keep it up =) |
by Ryko
Its not crappy! I can tell you have strong feelings about it and just need some more time to express your thoughts! :-D |