Love Is Like An Ocean

by Leah   Dec 20, 2005


Love is like an ocean,
and if you go to deep,
You'll crush under the presher,
And end in a break up of defeat.

Love is like an ocean,
you can choose to fish or swim,
but being caught can hurt you,
if you really trust him.

Love is like an ocean,
The sharks are the bad guys,
they always hurt or use you,
and bring tears to your eyes.

Love is like an ocean,
So learn to swim reall well,
Stay near schools of lots of fish,
that can help you when your down.

Love is like an ocean,
Saulty from your tears,
because love can be happy or,
bring out all your fears.
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  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Such a beautiful comparison... great writing sweetie, you've got alot of talent. Hope you continue writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by insane...need paded room

    That is a great poem

  • Wow hunny a great poem its a real deep and meaningfulk poem it sounds liek it comes from deep within the heart i loved it keep the good work up loves ya always crimson-pain xxxxxxxxx