by Ashleigh M
I like this poem a lot! good job! |
by Stephy
Hey hunn, stay strong and remember everyone is beautiful in their own way....-xxx- |
by Jackie Marie
Great job yet again! Awesome. 5/5 completly |
Good one Sabrina, long time no see ur poems, very good indeed. |
by beth
Wow very very impactin It caused me tears |
Awsome job, i love ur poems. 5/5 |
Truly sad. |
Great poem, brilliently written and expressed |
by Katlynn
Well i'm speachless. amazing job. i really loved this poem very sad but amazing. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |
by Amanda
Hi there. It would be me again. Im sorry if you do not like my comments, but I think your a terrific writer, and I would like to show you that, but putting my thoughts down for you. I, once again, like this poem. I think it has a lot of what goes on in peoples heads. I wouldn't neccessarily say that my walls are closing in on me. I would say that they are seperating me from the person I really am. ((just in my opinion)) I think to myself alot, that the person I am now, isnt the person I really want to be. and I think your poem, has shown people the way, they really should go. |
by pseudo
Wow.. that is an amazing poem.. so much pain is reflected in this poem and it shows thru you wrods very cleary.. beautifully written i hope you'll make it thru..kepp it up =) |
My tears fall now thick and fast. They fall for you, for pain, for me, for cutters and the messed up fate of this pathedic world. A world were physcially perfection is a vain obsession and people cut because the world around them is just too screwed up. Poems like this make me sad because they are so honest. Sometimes it is nice to pretend the world is a nice place again instead of facing the reality that it is not. |
by Krysten
Okay i'll start off by saying, woow, really good 5/5 and ty 4 commenting on my poems. i really liked this one, my girlfriend is going through something simalar, so it really touched me, there is really alot of emotion flowing through this. |
by Tara Kay
Wow, i love this poem, i love all your poems, you are so talented, keep it up |
by Juls
You'll work overall is amazing it blows my mind that some1 can write this well. keep up the good work |
Hwy, I loved this poem.. I can really relate alot 5/5 |
by Loulou
Awesome poem it is sooooooo good |