I liked how "No one left and no one came" was at the beginning and end of the poem. It made the poem flow nicely and it brought the poem together. Sad but a well written poem.

Nice stuff. Very straightforward, the flow and rhyming in this is good.

I missed two of your recient poems? dang! i'm so sorry. i don't know how this happened. great poem though. it's simple yet the emotions are put through it to the reader. i actually think that more emotion is through it because you make it so short. beautifully done and so sad.

~Jacklyn