This is a good nonet... keep trying to make each one better and better!

xxx Kailani xxx

It's a unusual style of poem, and it varies greatly from your other work, but nonetheless you still captured the vivid imagery and it still flows beautifully. A masterpiece!

Omg i love this poem i think i can relate to it id liek to hear more form u

Flowed nicely from beginning to end, awesome job!

This is really awsome i can really relate to it

I think it's absolutely amazing. I love it you should defiantly write more in this style . Take care xx:

*> : PainOfOne

"before I realize that" i'm not sure but i counted twice and i think it's missing a count. it's got six syllables. but hey i am proud of you and that you completed a nonet. i remembering you saying that you couldn't do them no matter how hard you tried. i knew you could do it! i didn't see when this poem was posted i'm sorry for posting late. i'm glad to be able to read a new poem and see you around lately though. i felt like i hadn't seen you in a while. i hope that everything is going well with you. happy late new year! i also believe that this is a reversed nonet. i'm not sure if nonet need to have to say reversed or not but i know etheree's do so i thought i might mention it. i don't know much about the different styles.

~Jacklyn