Pretty good poem, but i know im young but i was inspired to write those poems, i dont know i kinda got a little tired writing nothin but love and sad poems and i wanted to try something knew and ppl seem to think im good at it, so thats y i write those poems, n e way good poem 5/5 PeAcE

Hah kewl poem.. i know what you mean about being young.. but hey if you got talent then so what if you write this! good job!