Comments : Crying has turned to dying

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Aww thats sad but its good. no reason to die for a guy that would treat you like that hun, its not worth it in the long run. Keep writing and you will go far.
    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    WOW! that was soo powerful.. your emotions basically jumped out and slapped me in the face! lol.. amazing descriptions, i could imagine you spitting as you said them with so much hate.. hehe.. excellent poem and imagery and descriptions! keep up the brilliant work!
    love jessy xox