by myshiningstar14 Dec 20, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The eeriness of the way you feel so alone, gets to you. It leaves messages in blood on your walls; telling you you're not worth it. |
5/5 |
by Monique
Hey thanks for commenting on my stuff. and i jsut started to write too so my stuff also isnt perfect and nothign compared to your poems. you're a great writer,keep it up. I like this poem "Your Pain in a bottle" The pain you keep trapped inside, i love it. its so true, not many ppl open up and let it out, its pain trapped inside ur soul, pain in a bottle. good job...very good idea for a poem. |
I wuz anxious to find out whats gona said next, great poem.. really good.. i like it a lot 5/5!! |
Screen name lol |
Cool poem, my SN? Wot is that? I hev no idea lol, okay, 5/5 |