by Simon Hayes Dec 20, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Lurking in the cold |
by Ann Stareyes
Simon |
by Crystal
Great Poem!!! It is very sad that some do live this way, and I think about how much we complain about money and other things when there is people out there like that man in your poem. LOVED IT!! |
by Angie
Very powerful write Simon. Its so sad that people live and die this way. You've written it beautifully as well. |
by Melissa
Perfectly written! A wonderful poem with a big message! I love it! |
by Nathan
Well if the man was on the streets for self inflicting problems like drugs, life is a cruel master, and you live and die by the choices you make, but if he's just a guy in a bad spot, then I feel for him. either way I liked how you portrayed the story |