That is a really sad poem Simon. Very well written I must add. At this time of year, we should really keep an eye out for the needy. It's going to be a cold winter, fortunately a warmer Christmas here in my town. It's really sad these people have no homes, and worst, no family on Christmas. I was in tears reading this, thanks for the read my friend. This is a very heart filling poem.

Simon,
That was a really sad poem...made want to cry...many of us don't realize how lucky we are and that we should try to find a way to help others in life. It was an amazing poem, very touching. Thank you so much for sharing this with us, we appreciate your poetry.

Well if the man was on the streets for self inflicting problems like drugs, life is a cruel master, and you live and die by the choices you make, but if he's just a guy in a bad spot, then I feel for him. either way I liked how you portrayed the story

Perfectly written! A wonderful poem with a big message! I love it!

Very powerful write Simon. Its so sad that people live and die this way. You've written it beautifully as well.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Great Poem!!! It is very sad that some do live this way, and I think about how much we complain about money and other things when there is people out there like that man in your poem. LOVED IT!!

Simon
This was a powerful write and a sad one....so beautifully written. brought a tear to my eye....

love ya, Ann