Very nicely written...keep up the good work!-xxx-

Wow what lovely poem but at same time it was sad one..anyways i'm really sorry u lost ur partner but i wish u good luck..and it was very necely written one Keep it up the good job Much love from

Jammal

WOW !! sad and nice one ... i love dat .. good written and good use of language... 5/5 of course

Great job!i luv ur poems coz they are always filled with emotions keep it up take care and always shine babe luv jOsIe....