So many reasons

by Hayley   Dec 20, 2005


So many reasons why I cry,
Hold my blanket over my closed eyes.
So many reasons why the razor pierces my pale skin.
And I dont know if I should give up or try to win.
I cant breath, and I'm suffocating,
This life feels like a dream but Im not sleeping.
the blade gets harder to resist
sometimes all i want is to not exist
so many voices telling me to go
one little whisper begging me no.
someone once told me to never look back
and i got lost, stepped on the wrong track.
Lies drugs deception, heartbreak and pain
crying and cutting nothing to lose, only scars to gain.
Hayley
copyright 2005

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  • 17 years ago

    by KrypticKristen

    I haven't read ur stuff in FOREVER but
    woah, i really love this one.
    I can really relate and it's really well written. It's really sad, but that is good...but i hope things do get better for you. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

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  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Omg...so sad! i loved it though...i can relate about the cutting...though i am trying to quit...i realized it's not worth it...but...yeah...5/5...it was excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I liked ur way so muchhh,its incredible,nice poem..gorgeous words..i cannot say anythin but tht ur poem is more than perfect..keep up da good work..wish you all da best..

  • 18 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    WOW!!! This poem is AWESOME!!! It has so many deep sayings...i love the whole little voice bit...it's so cool!! But listen...don't ever think cutting is the answer...because although it's addicting, you're just hurting yourself MORE! You can overcome it...there are better ways with dealing with pain...like talking to someone who cares about you. If you ever need to talk to someone who will just LISTEN, i'm always here!! Feel free to comment me anytime!!! AMAZING poem...you get 5/5 completely!!! Hang in there...feel free to talk to me about it...i'd be more than happy to listen!! :)

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