Remi's Poem

Ouch, that was sad. I hope you didn't truly mean that about feeling broken and unloved. Anyway, Remi isn't very smart to let you go...I think so, anyway.

Be strong, and don't let someone's rash decisons get you down!!

//T.L.//

I like the emotions displayed in this poem, sad and real. I feel that there's still room for improvement for the flow of this poem. Just a thought, hope you don't mind. =)

Nonetheless, it is a heartfelt piece. =)

Aww. That poem has so much power. It's so sad.

This is very sad. It reminded me of Remy Lebeau of the X-men for some reason.
Just remember, you will find better, some day, and he will love you, too.

I feel like this a lot and this is a bery well writtenpoem...i loved everyword of it...5/5