by Darien
A very good poem. I know this feeling. Our first love never really seems to die. |
by Princess09
Good poem add punctuation. |
I feel like this a lot and this is a bery well writtenpoem...i loved everyword of it...5/5 |
by Truest Lies
This is very sad. It reminded me of Remy Lebeau of the X-men for some reason. |
by blank
Aww. That poem has so much power. It's so sad. |
by Dreams
I like the emotions displayed in this poem, sad and real. I feel that there's still room for improvement for the flow of this poem. Just a thought, hope you don't mind. =) |
by Truest Lies
Ouch, that was sad. I hope you didn't truly mean that about feeling broken and unloved. Anyway, Remi isn't very smart to let you go...I think so, anyway. |