Thats great! really sweet. it flows very well, and the style is nice and simple. well done

Ruby

Ur bf is obviously lucky...its only once in a while, that you can find a guy thats true, and pure. and know that he loves u back, for u. This poem was very beautiful, and i think u should show this to him..if u already havn't.

Very romantic. I only hope that someday I too will feel the love you share. I would however take out some of the repition that is exposed.. such as the word "that" is kinda makes the poem lose some feeling.

--Sher

I remember that day
Our lips fell together
Our first kiss that we shared
And every kiss after

I love that stanza the most. Excellent job.

Tiffany.xox.

Awww that is so adorable I know exactely how you feel!!! Wonderful job 5/5

Oooooo I can relate! i love it! 5/5

I know how you feel. When you find the one, you hope it's forever. Congrats on finding a way to write it in detail. Keep Writing.

Wow....Superb. I give that one a 10 but this stupid thing only goes to 5. Oh well. It's great.

BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY!!

:)

LISSA