A Poem for a Girl

by Little Dot   Dec 21, 2005


Sent to the hospital
Because of those idiots
Who drove through the light
And hit her car
Now she lays in a hospital bed
In a coma slowly drifting away
Into the eternal sleep that awaits her
With internal bleeding
She is now dying
Only because some jerks
Were in a hurry to get somewhere
Now they face charges
While she faces death
How could this be far
They pay some money
Go to jail for a few days maybe
And she lies six feet under
How dare they take such a beautiful life

~This poem is about a true event that happened to one of my friends. She is still in the hospital and may not make it.~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brian King

    Sort of just a story and although i'm sure you feel many things on the topic but i saw little to none emotion in your words only "jerks" really made me connect to your emotions. rather than get angry and go big you chose a often forgotten word that (to me aleast) means alot more than the more common "badder" words.

    you still sent the point across about the gravity of stupid peoples actions

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I truly pray that your friend makes it. I can only imagine the pain that you're going through. My grandmother went through this last year, although she had a stroke not a car accident, but I think I understand to some extent what you're going through. Great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ramy medhat

    Nice poem,and my wishes that your friend will be fine again soon..

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    This reminds me of one of the simple plan's MTV, can't remember the title though. It's a message to those drunkers who drives.

    Anyway, this is a really sad poem, especially one written for a friend. It makes my skin crawls thinking of it. It's sad that there're such selfish people.

    This poem also written a message to all of us, which is, to treasure life. Hope you're doing okay. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Ogm this was perfect! i luvd this poem very much..there was so much emmotion and it really drew u into the poem! 5/5!!!

    ~*Who Cares?*~