by Jen Dec 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Her wrist is like a book |
by Tim
Nice word choice, nice and simple, just how people like me like it. |
Omg, i love it! thats an amazing poem, and the ryhming wasnt forced or anything! my rating for this poem is a ten out of five... lol it rocked!!! lol great job!! thanks for the comment! |
Hey. |
by Chancie.
OH MY!! THAT POEM. IS SOOO BEAUTIFUL. EVERYTHING WAS GREAT. YOU HAVE NO NEED TO CHANGE A THING! IT IS A FABULOUS POEM. YOU WORDS WERE SO SINSCERE AND FORM THE HEART, KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, |
by Carrie
Aww.. this is soo sad.. I almost started crying... really good write... |