Comments : Her wrist is like a book

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Aww.. this is soo sad.. I almost started crying... really good write...

  • 18 years ago

    by Chancie.

    OH MY!! THAT POEM. IS SOOO BEAUTIFUL. EVERYTHING WAS GREAT. YOU HAVE NO NEED TO CHANGE A THING! IT IS A FABULOUS POEM. YOU WORDS WERE SO SINSCERE AND FORM THE HEART, KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK,

    20/10

    LUV/Chancie

  • 18 years ago

    by x. Sleeping Beauty .x

    Hey.
    I read the last stanza of your poem on the quote thing and just had to cme and read it. i really loved this poem.. keep writing.. 5/5.

    Sleeping Beauty

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Mureen

    Omg, i love it! thats an amazing poem, and the ryhming wasnt forced or anything! my rating for this poem is a ten out of five... lol it rocked!!! lol great job!! thanks for the comment!

    hannah

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim

    Nice word choice, nice and simple, just how people like me like it.