Wow, powerful and greatly written poem...well done |
by Ûµ.Autumn.Ûµ
Way to get the point through |
by Becky
Wow, this poem was like really powerful. I myself have been cutting for about 4 years now and i used do do toehr forms of self harm before that. It's a hard thing for other people to undertsand. Sadly enough most people don't try to understand and they just judge. I really like the message you were trying to get out with this poem. I am adding ou to my faveorites cuz I really love your work. 5/5 |
by pain is me
This was freaking amazing!!! you got your point thro loud and clear. i thought it was really powerful...5/5 |
This is great....i love it soo much |
Omg...thank you so much for writing this...i completely agree...which is why i'm trying to stop... |
AMAZING! i loved it. it's so true and really makes you understand what pain people go through. Good work! |
Great poem.. i really enjoyed it. 5/5 |
Wow that poem was amazingg! |
by ILoveRobbie
Whoa! This poem is really GREAT! It gave me cold chills! |
by Fear2love
I like thiz one |
by don
Simply brilliant write on self harming, I have been self harming since I was 9, so I understand this |
You are right - there are many ways of self harm to release pain. The depth or kind of cut doesn't matter, because either way it still cried red tears of "help me". I hope this habit is in your past, but I know that sometimes it is a habit that doesn't rest easily. :/ |
by Nil
It comes back every now and then- Sometimes it's like a craving and I have to just try my best to not give in again |
A vivid portrayal of self harm, dramatic and deep. It is such strong imagery of one bleeding their life away and I like the comparisons because for the sufferer it must seem like art since creativity is a release of emotional energy in what ever format. Something I would not normally have read but a compelling read. Thank you for sharing Milly x |