Wow! awesome poem...i loved it...i wish i could write as well as you do...its the expectant person....if you find time can u please check out a couple uv mine as well? thanks...
and oh i almost forgot...KEEP WRITING!!!

dhaval.

Wow Darlin,
You never stop amazing me, Breath taking, and as to your questions I take option B('',) lol this was well done hun, keep it up Miss u already -hugs-

Love Jenn
Ps: Your Sexy

Interestingly enough, i actually got an image of the BEACH itself (or the beach "experience") - and a longing for someone to come visit it....kind of sad, really, considering the winter season is upon us

but that's besides the point - what i should have said right off the start is: GOOD LORD! i didn't know you could write so well!

it's even got perfect meter and interesting rhyme (not like the blassé classics "love, dove" and all that razmatazz...)

your writing is WICKEDLY awesome, Aidyn, man...and i've looked through some of your other pieces, too - it's not just a fluke or anything: you're GOOD, alright...but i'm sure you knew that with all the positive feedback you're getting anyway.

thanks for giving me the link
~Elena~

Wow.omagosh.it's....BEAUTIFUL!!!
i honestly am in love with it.i think it can be either a person waiting for their lover or a siren or summing like that.personally i love the idea of a person waiting for a lover to come back.sounds all nice and ballad-y, but it's really...nice...ambiguous the way it is.