This is a really creative poem. A lot of imagery and personafication. I really enjoyed this. I am off to read some more.

But what else do we have to write with?

This poem is really good. it's a bit like one of my poems, although yours is better :)

Hey great poem.. thw words r really fantastic and i love da way its written!! well done..Stephy :)

I think this is a great poem. words certianly have the power in this world. the power to hurt, heal and express anything that someone may feel.

"thensuddenlyreturnonoverload" love the line it really adds something to the poem. it's unique as well. great job.

and Ariana i read part of your profile you aren't ugly. beauty shouldn't be based on what the media makes it out to be.

~Jacklyn

Geat poem, its diferent and quiet unique. so of the lines are really very creative.

5/5

I love this! Excellent 5/5. It's really fun to read, & shows you have a good sense of humour too. You have a nice mind :) Crazy but nice. (like mine lol). Nice work. :)

Mike

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That was great i loved it not bad for a first timer i this kinda stuff good work keep it up 5/5

This is really cool and most definitely unique!I love the way you just seem to play with the words and having fun doing it, but I also see the deper meaning within.Great poem!

First and foremost, thank you for the much appreciated comment. And yes, this poem is very different, but I like it. You tell about the word then proceed to give an example. I don't know of anyone has ever done anything like this before. It's unique in an extraordinary way.Pretty awesome.

An interesting idea, and not a bad one at all. Very creative.