Comments : STRUGGLE

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Way to go Girl!

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Good poem indeed....
    keep it up dear
    amazing words

    the string broke down
    beads scattered
    got into the earth
    but reached the sky

    lovely...

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You are an angel for thinking that way, very touching, keep it u0 girl, and it has just mark the one year of tsunami...but I don't think I can write a poem about it, can you?

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    You are so compassionate..i love this poem. Thankyou for sharing your such beautiful heart.
    take care
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    5/5 awwwwwww thats so sweet of u to do that. u show u care bout ppl u didnt even knw,u share their emotions wit us too. thats really good bharti. acha kyia!

    take care
    sonam