Nothing Ever Happens (the way that i want it to)

by Jess   Dec 21, 2005


Holding this tight in the palm of my hand,
Will you ever really understand?
And I'm gripping so tightly
That I cant let go,
Willing with my whole body
That when I stop this you'll know.
Cause I'm pretending its real,
I'm pretending your mine,
I'm pretending you're here,
I'm pretending I'm fine.
But I know it's not real when I open my eyes,
Cause you are not here and it all is just lies.
Cause these are my hopes and my dreams to come true,
But nothing ever happens the way that I want it to.
No nothing ever happens, the way that i want it to.

please vote and comment on my poem, id really love 2 know what you think of it xx

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I like the use of repetition of words to make different points. Very effective.

  • 18 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    YOUR POEM IS SOO GOOD!!! it is one of my favorites if you can comment me on my poems
    peace out~~~ linda

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Dani~*~

    Wow! first thanks for commenting on mine and second WOW! i swear we are going through the exact same thing because it seems like it in the poems...would love to hear back from you

  • 18 years ago

    by *heidi;

    Oh mi gosh!i love it!and thanks for commenting on my poem.

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