Hey ummm I dont know you but hey nice poem I can feel the emotion leap off the page....keep writting and Ill keep reading

MariA

Damn....just wanna tell ya that I love your poem. It's so great! Well written and all. Nice job 5/5 Keep it up and always take care.

Damn Anthony..... very deep, I can feel it. Wonderfully done. Keep up the awesome work..... every write I read from you is better than the last...

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

I love it! Very powerful choice of words, you have a talent ^.^
I happily give ya a five!

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**AynJal**

Wow...i like it, deep, the pain-staking truth, as it should be. 5 of 5 my good fellow.

A great write Anthony, well done :)

Omg that's really good. i like the first part of it the best- about the dreams and stuff. well done!

Wow this is so good! Exellent job! I write similar poems to this! Check em out if you want to ;)

I love your poem it has meaning to your own words.

Very good! wow im ready to cry lol well check out some of my stuff

Hiya, very good poem you can tell it can from the heart and had great emotion! Linds x x

GR8t poim tons of emotion! IT gives new outlooks! keep writin you've got a gr8t talent!

Wow, that was great! I definately understand why you won this category. I hope to see some more from you! Keep it up! :)

Wow thats a really good poem. i like it.

Some brilliant descriptions and imagery anthony, you certainly have a lot of talent for a boy so young, well done to you, your emotions poured like waterfalls throughout this poem, each stanza flowed beautifully if not scarily, you wrote this incredibly well,

"Monkey's dancing in my face,
while my heart beats fast.
Screaming for the world to help,
Will someone come at last?"

This stanza to me was just brilliant!
I also loved the way you ended it, all in all well done!
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"Monkey's dancing in my face,"
I don't like and can't understand this line.

"Ans soon I'll be trapped inside."

I think you meant "And".

The rest of the poem is excellent.

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