After you commenting on my poem I thought it'd be nice to read some of yours.. I wasn't disappointed at all! This one I love though..it's so full of passion n' it's kind of like my ideal dream too..not in a freaky way. Well done, 5/5 definitely

I am in office...and cant think much abt such poems...lol!!

hey!! that was once again a great poem...where were u all these time.. :o)

I love this poem. It is amazing how your choice of words fully decribed the setting (beach). Words of love and fantasy flows smoothly that's why the feeling of being in love can be seen in every line. Great job! By the way thanks for leaving a comment on my work "Fobidden love". I greatly appreciate it!