by black_hearted_lover Dec 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She sits with a blank stare |
by Jawwad Zafar
Wow! excellent work |
by Treehugger
This poem is different from what I have read but its very sad and emotional. I do like the repeating lines. and the flow was nice as well. I don't love how ever how you started out rhyming and stopped. otherwise nice read 4/5 |
by Amber Dawn
WoW. i love you girl i really like this sooo much!! i just hope that you write more!! i have i new one out so yeah love ya lots |