Comments : Lost

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber Dawn

    WoW. i love you girl i really like this sooo much!! i just hope that you write more!! i have i new one out so yeah love ya lots

  • 11 years ago

    by Treehugger

    This poem is different from what I have read but its very sad and emotional. I do like the repeating lines. and the flow was nice as well. I don't love how ever how you started out rhyming and stopped. otherwise nice read 4/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jawwad Zafar

    Wow! excellent work