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That's such an amazing poem. You're theme was very unique. I'm truly speechless about this poem! You have lots of talents! Keep it up and take care.

Wow girl, this is so awesome.... very well done indeed. Your talent just amazes me. I agree with Gesselle, I am speechless.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

All I can say is WOW this is so well writen and spooky keep it up 5/5

Awesome!! One of the best poems I have ever read in my life...Keep up the great work!

HOLY MOLY!! Im not sure what to say. I did NOT expect that!!! Wow...I'm in awe right now....give me a second...

Ok...I'm good...no wait...NO really I'm good.

Atomic...that is truly one of the best pieces I've read in...God I don't know how long. That was AWESOME! It was just absolutely perfect. From beginning to end...it flowed perfectly and the story was just amazing. You have quite an imagination and a way with words. I can't tell you enough how awesome I really think this poem is!!! I'd even "woot woot" for you...HAHAHA Excellent write!!! :)

Truly amazing... A great line at thend, almost like a twist in a story/film. A wonderful piece Atomic :)

Awwww thats so sad... its a really good poem tho!! thank you for commenting on one of my poems.. i appreciate it! but yeah.. if you ever want to talk.. thatd be wicked cool... lol i sound like im in elementary school.. LOL,.. but yeah my email address is lovecutepancake@hotmail.com and i have aol instant messenger: cutelovepancake or brattlovepancake... so if you ever want to talk then email me or im me... thanks so much!! keep up the great work!!!
amanda

Wow, thats an amazing poem of your Im glad I read it. Kepp up to great work hun

Juls

Wow this was honestly amazing! i absolutly loved the ending! purely amazing! keep it up! i am most definetly going to read more!

sammie

That was great. i loved it. it was very enjoyable. nice work. keep it up
Emma 5/5

Wow, 10/5! A brilliant and emotional poem. So very very true and not fair at the same time. When one person clings on to a relationship and the other lets it fade away, there is nothing more painful, nothing so hurting as that. Its a fate worse than death in every way. I hope you didn't have to go through that, and if you did, my heart is with you.

-Tainted Mikochan

That is really sad. I like the last line "Even the dead can die again". Very nice! Good descriptions and it flowed very nicely.

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Awwww. Would you stop making me want to cry with yor poetry, woman! That poor tortured soul. I love how your writing always has a story weaved in that makes you want to keep reading and that makes you feel for the characters. I love writing that makes me feel and all of your writing does. VERY NICE!

Good stuff i dig