Comments : The Illusions of Love

  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    This poem feels so real...specially this lines: She saw her future in his eyes,
    It was as empty as his soul.
    So why did she chose to stay,
    When she could have up and go?...

    I feel so much connection with this beautiful poem. Nice job and thanks for sharing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    One more thing: Sometimes we don't see deep enough and we miss a beautiful chance to be happy.

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Again, I am speechless.............

  • 19 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wow, great poem and great topic. It really shows how love can blind a person. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Yes love is blind... So much so we miss so much we could have seen. A great poem explaining this. Well done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacks smirking revenge

    This poem is amazing.
    i can actually relate to it alot... sadly...
    thank you. it opened me up. you are a terrific writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by K

    OMG... that poem is so sad :'( I swear I was so into it to the point that I wanted to cry. I LOVE this poem! Cant wait to read the rest of them!

    ~Kwote~

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Yet again you amaze me! i love your peoms sooo much! keep it up!

    sammie

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    So beautifully true

  • 17 years ago

    by XxtoribrookexX

    Wow. i almost cried when i read this. this reminds me of me and my ex. he was cheating on me. we'd been dating 6 months. thanks for writing this. it's beautiful! =) 5/5

    --tori brooke*