This is very good, it made me think bout when i tried to tell my friend about how i thought i was depressed and she jus shut me down, we dont tlk nemore.... neway this is about ur poem, well written, u have a way of makin things "flow" well when u write. keep it up!

Hiya bbz, this poem is really touching, 5/5.
plz read/write/comment on mine lotsa luv farrah