Blunt Truth

by Kirsty   Dec 22, 2005


So I'm the one who's wrong
Cause you are always right
And I'm the one who moved on first
You retaliate in spite
I'm the one who takes a walk
When you've always got to run
I'm the one who stabbed your heart
But you're the one who used the gun
Yes! I'm the one who stole a kiss
But you're the one who shared his bed
Thi is when your true colours shine
Building up inside my head
I'm the one who falls down
But you're falling twice a great
You tell me where I'm at fault
My problem lays in your mistake
Influenced by alcohol
You wanted me to believe
The same excuse as mine I know
But it's not good enough for me!
I'm the one who smiles
When you're outside having fun
Just don't expect when you whistle
I will always come.....!

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  • 18 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    Wow, another good poem. Once again I really like it, its got a good flow, and I like the meaning behind the poem. The rythmn is good, hell its all good. Well Done!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Josh

    Very nice Kristy... I do want to know however if this poem relates to some personal problems going on in your life... If so then Email me so I can help you.... Oh yeah still waiting for my poem hunny.... Good job on your writtings....

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Hey,
    very well written, i like the whole were doing the same thing but youre better idea if that makes sence, i read your profile, i can understand the whole father thing, anyway good job keep writting!-xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Brillent! i loved it. the words were very creative and was intelligently written. it was full of passion. flowed rather well too.

    Brad

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Welcome back Kirsty. And what a wonderful comeback. I missed you girl. I really did.

    I myself, still having a block haha, have pieces of poems here and there unable to finish em. THought you were havin a block aswell. Well that was actually what I was hoping. Cause I was worried, was wonderin if you were ok.

    But ye.. Glad to see you back. Wonderful poem Kirsty. As allways girl, as always. Girl, I love you, take care sweety, love you love you love you

    -xxx- huggies lossa love

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