Comments : Shadow(not done)

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Coreyy...That was good. I liked the emotion you put into it as well as the flow. I liked how you stated your feelings and what she is doing and feeling..Nice work.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Ver ygood. it flows well and matains momentum thoughout. also full of feeling.

    5/5