I'm glad you expressed yourself in this beautifully written poem and wish that you write many more beautifully written poems but with nicer topics I bid you well =) |
by shadowlight
Great poem, written very well and effectivly |
by Sherry Lynn
A poem written that helps one deal with certain things in life is a good poem. |
by Jackie Marie
Hey I don't think it was bad. I thought it was really good. It came from the heart and that is what is good about it. Good job! |
"It was a bittersweet, melancholy happy day"- I think that was the best line.. It touched me... And I know how this feels... In my life, instead of the nun it was my own grandmother... The only difference is she's not yet... but anyways... |
Sorry, it's suppose to say-- |