Comments : Can I Stop?

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    I'm glad you expressed yourself in this beautifully written poem and wish that you write many more beautifully written poems but with nicer topics I bid you well =)

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowlight

    Great poem, written very well and effectivly

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    A poem written that helps one deal with certain things in life is a good poem.

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Hey I don't think it was bad. I thought it was really good. It came from the heart and that is what is good about it. Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    "It was a bittersweet, melancholy happy day"- I think that was the best line.. It touched me... And I know how this feels... In my life, instead of the nun it was my own grandmother... The only difference is she's not yet... but anyways...
    I think it's better to let your feelings out then to keep it in... hope you feel better...
    great write.. 5/5

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Sorry, it's suppose to say--

    she's not d e a d yet...