I am

by UnToLd TrUtH   Dec 22, 2005


I am sad and afraid.
I wonder what I was thinking.
I hear your voice.
I want you to leave.
I am sad and afraid.

I pretend not to hear.
I feel your touch.
I just want you to go away.
I worry I may love you.
I cry because I know I can't have you.
I am sad and afraid.

I understand you'll leave me.
I say I will miss you.
I dream to forget you.
I try but I can't.
I hope you can hear me.
I am sad and afraid.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Hey! Sweet poem, nicely done. I like how you used "I" as repition as well as the line 'I am sad and afraid'. You really portaryed your emotions. Keep up the awesome work!

    5/5

    --Angie xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    This is good, but i'm confused by it. who is this meant to? someone you like? well its good though and it flowed nicely. theres a lot of emotion in it! keep writing it! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 18 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    I personal didn't like all the I's.. I think it is supposed to be focused on you but I think it was just too much.

    -Rachel
    3/5

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    All i have 2 say is great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    Once again good job. Nice use of repitition, it was definently there, but not overbearing. Keep it up!!!

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