Sincerely, the last good part of me

by Jeffrey   Dec 22, 2005


Like a mouse in a hole its where he should have stayed
but the craving in him had to make the connection
alluring impersonations make even the most hesitant unafraid
an uncontrollable addiction to spread his dejection

heed this messenger's message and try to escape
alas your journey will begin into his deceitful neurosis
and all that waits you a path of endless emotional rape
accompanied by his pain that defeats his chance to focus

more pathetic then you were lead to believe
sickened by what his eyes enjoy to deliver
glorified in the best words lies were able to conceive
the truth would make you quiver

Sincerely,
the last good part of me

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  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Wow. well. this is the best one so far. The emotion was nice. And.. so was the flow. depth wasn't good at all. but yeah.

    Overall Rating: 4.7/5

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    The first verse the second sentance wass a mouth full ot read..but this poem as well shows excellent worrk. best yet...

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Has anyone ever told you... for a one year old.. you write brilliantly. Lol.
    Well then.. I will just type what I always type.. Lovely poem 5/5.

    xx.CommercialsRoxMyKneeHighSox.xx

  • 18 years ago

    by limp

    OH.
    yes. comment. mk. RLY.
    j00 alien.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine Stephens

    It didn't catch my attention as much as the others did

    Gurl from library
    Catherine Stephens

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