Good work, you have good emotion in this poem, and a good rhyme scheme.

Hmm, seems like you get all of your ideas lying in bed. That's like me, especially when I'm upset. Really good stuff, I like the rhyme scheme, and the creative rhymes you had.

First of all, Thanks for your comment =]
Now 'bout your poem;
I really liked the imagery.
I really enjoyed this couplet "Through the thicket of sorry and gilt,
Weaving through trees like a needle in a quilt;"
Was well written.
Well done twas a good poem. =)