Comments : Pieces Scattered on the Street

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordi

    Wow thtas reli amazing!!!!! made me cry! x0

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    *sighs sadly* :( dont get down, wolfy. the world will only close on you when you let it. till then, remember it is YOUR future and it is all in ur hands. I'll be writing a poem for you soon... from ur fan,friend and sis rainy :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Hey girl, I really love this poem. It's so sad.

    I loved the idea, how desperately you are walking those streets looking for the pieces of you heart. I especially loved the part, where you hit your knees, push the leaves aside.. I just could see it all happen. You descibed it so beautiful.

    And that's what I love about your work. There are so many emotions in it. Your emotions. And you just tell it like a story. It flows. It really does. And it's so sad. It's excellent. I love your work. Well done once again!

    Lotsaaa love -xxx-