0h what a t0uching piece. very heartfelt. l0t 0f em0ti0n. g0od j0b. keep it up

Aw, wow this poem brought me to tears its so sad, aw, it should be a movie aw, i dont know what else to say but aw, this is beautiful hun, wow great work, keep on writing, xxoo

5/5! this was so so good! ... it would be so sad if that happened... i wouldn't be able to bare it... anyways, this was amazing, and thank you for all the comments you've ever give me...

Halu (that means hello lol),

That poem was sooo sad. I wouldn't be able to bear it if that had happened to me. It almost brought me to tears. I especially loved the last part "In life and now in death". That is so beautiful. Awesome job!! 5/5

TAKE CARE-
stargazer38
P.S. Thanks for
the comment on my
poem. It means a lot. :)

Great poem i really loved it so much!!!

Wow this is beautiful...so sad. But wow its amazing and I loved every single stanza. You had me really into the story.

::MELI::

Wow, this is so sad! Excellent write though! Great job!

Hey well I think that this poem was sad. I really like it though. keep up the good work.

Great job! I really hope this didn't happen to you, but if it did, i'm sorry. Great job! Keep writing! 5/5

Wow, hun this is very good.

Wow.. dis poem was so gretly thought out and very differnt.. well done keep iot up mwaz! XX stephy

That is such an amazing poem... wowowowowow! I'm speechless, you're very talented.

Great poem. I really liked it.

*Clouds n ur Is.*

Oh my God. This was an excellent poem. And I'm dreadfully sorry this happened.

-Taylor

Though it may not be a true story it is still so very touching. Great writers not only write about experiences they have, but also what they can imagine. Can a story that is not real still be portrayed to the audience as real. That is the true test and yes my dear you have passed that test.

--Sher

Even if its not a true story its and excellent poem, your a good story telling great work xox rc

This is a great poem nice job this poem made me cry keep up the nice work

For a story poem, this was quite the enjoyable read. Overall I felt the mood brighter than it should have been with the use of certain words as you did. But it truly did seem like a true story, so I can understand how people would have believed that to be the case. Keep up the beautiful work.

Wow that is so beautiful~ and so amazing! Wow beautiful~

This is a good poem because sometimes when something good is about to happen it all goes wrong and you might always remember it good job!