The ending is class!!! Excellent 5/5

This poem is great

I never cried this hard reading a poem..EVER..WOW!!!!!! For not being true you did a hell of a job writing this! I mean great/sad story and you wrote it as if you were this woman! Oh I feel so sorry for her although its not true...Wonderful write that is just heart breakingly sad!

Wow.. that's amazing!

Wow, that was a really powerful poem. You did an amazing job. The scenary was so realistic. I adore it. Nothing less than a 5 that's for sure. =)
xoxo

Omg..im in shock at how you could write something so real..so passionate without it being real. you are a truly gifted writer.
wow..im speachless..nearly had me in tears.
take care
>torn -x.x.x-