Comments : Devil's Puppet (Sold My Soul)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    This is truly an excellent write; however, I would recommend omitting the line Identy raped. For some reason it does not seem to fit; at least not in my opinion.

    Just a suggestion

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by sandra

    Mmmm kinda sad