by lilia Dec 22, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
It seems the more I'm with you |
by JAY Poet
Great poem i loved it so much your a wonderful writer!!!!!!!! |
by TinyDancer46
Wow, you did such a great job at expressing the way you feel.. I can really relate to this. I hope that things work out, and keep up the incredible writing! |
by dora
Ithat was really g0od. g0od j0b expressin urself. very well written. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t. h0pe u had a w0nderful xmas and all ur wishes came true. keep up the great w0rk! |
I totally understand ma, love can be so confusing. I really liked it. I think it needs a little more work but its really good. Thanx for ur comments on my poems and for not critizing me bout being the other girl. |