Excelent job tess!!! THis is verysad but very good!!!
Love ya Liz

Daaaamn...5/5... lots of emotion...i wish i could write like that...id give i higher rating if i could.

love much ,
becca

Truely amazing poem, I hope you really dont do this and are just familiar with the topic. Add punctuation but other then that its perfect!!
~~Sweetie

Despite t'a morbidity a' t'a poem it be very well written. Great job.

Wit'out wax,
Seth

Wow tess
your such a good writer
luv u heaps babe
missing u heaps too
i wish i could write like u
xoxoxoxox
mary

Wow i can realte to this so much. its scary how much i can relate.. wel neways this is such a good poem. it makes me sad tho.. well keep writing
take care
luve angie