by Jenn
Hey, I really liked this poem, it was great, been there and felt the same way...its a good thing I had someone who picked me up if not for him I dunno where I would be...byt great poem and i read your profile... Love peanut butter and grill cheese is the best ..lol |
This is such a beautiful poem. When i read this, i could feel all the emtions u put into it...& u are truly a great writer, i can't find anything to comment, on, but i love this line |
by Samantha
Wow.. this was one of the most meaningful and well written poems i have ever written! it was just simply amazing and i wouldnt tell you to change a thing thats how perfect it is! keep it up! you did a great job and i'm gonna read some more! |
Great poem, effectivly structured well written and very emotional. |
WOW WOW WOW OMG geesh that was brilliant - how long have you been writing? I truly loved that poem. I only wish I had your talent. I rated it a five by the way bit damn it deserves a lot more than that. WELL DONE!!! =) |
by Sherry Lynn
Though it starts out so sad the ending is truly wonderful. You done a great job twisting this piece and giving the reader a different outcome than expected. |
by Truest Lies
That is VERY nice. It had an innocence, as well as a maturity that was very heart-touching. |
by Katlynn
Amazing job. i have to say i really liked this poem. I liked how at the end her angel came and told her not to go and that was the only person to stop her i mean it's almost the last person you expect to help you out. Very nice work. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. Ps: thanks for the comment means alot to me. |
by Russell
I like this poem a lot...its very powerful.I also like the ending very well.Your a great poet..keep up the great work |
by pseudo
That was a truly touching poem.. very sad but end it all worked out! loved it. if we could all have our happy endings eh.. beautiful piece! keep it up =) |
Beautiful poem! I can relate to it a lot.. Only, I haven't found that angel yet. Great write. |
I can relate to the poem, only my angel is out of town, i guess you can say. very good poem. 5/5 you did a very good job on it. |
by LadyPearl
Very inspirational, great job |
Awww this poem is really good!! |
by Amanda
Such a sad but beautiful piece of writing. I thought it was really good and i enjoyed reading it to the end. :) |
by SuperJenius
Wow!!! how long have u been doing this its like youve been writing 4ever |
by xX-jess-Xx
This poem is really beautiful. i cant really fault it, its lovely! jesxx |
This poem flowed so smoothly into my heart I could her an angel singing through you. I see a light over a dark shadow and feel the presence of Love...... outstanding work |
by ~*~Morgan~*~
Omg i love this poem so much. Welcome to my favorites. I am in the same situation but no ones given me the hope yet. |
by Dreams
What's the best thing in life none other than a happy ending?! =) |