by Robert
Its a really sweet poem... also emotional & well written. well done. |
Loved it... its so well written and i loved da use of rhyme great job! your very talented 5/5 |
by cochise
This is such a beautiful poem.I really liked this , it was great, been there and felt the same way. Keep it up |
by cochise
This is such a beautiful poem.I really liked this , it was great, been there and felt the same way. Keep it up |
by Cari
Omg, that is really good. its really sad. i had some1 save me 2 after no one wud listen, im not sure if thats wut happened in ur poem but neways i loved how its written. 5/5 :) |
by ratchild666
This is really good. i love this stanza: |
So a sad poem, it was done very well. Amazing work. |
by Jacklyn
Great poem. i loved the ending it was beautifully writen. goes to show how important people are in our lifes. i hope that things are going well for you. and that if you had cut that you are past that now. i hope that things are better. |
by Jacklyn
Alright i'm just going to point out a few areas that i'm talking about in my comment. i'm glad you want to improve! |
Absolutly love it...great story to it and very sad fits the category great ....it was deep meaning ful w/ a great flow!! (i especially liked the flow) 5/5 |
by Emma
I like the poem. it was good nice flow. |
Wow, excellent poem hun, i know exactly how you feel. |
by Tammy
Beautiful & sad at the same time. I like your writing style. |
by avery
I can relate a lot to this poem, |
by Void
I don't know what anyone else has said, but I have to say - I love it. It was excellent, flawless. I connected with it perfectly, it was a poem from my own heart ... 'Sept for the fact that it was from yours :P lol. Never doubt your poems, because I can tell you this much - this is incredible. |
by Little Dot
Wow, once again, amazing poem. These are are so well done. This poem has great flow and was so well written. |
Wow..this is like abuot me except the last 2 lines bcuz no one luvs me stil n no angel has convinced me 2 stay..anyway..wow gr8 work! 5/5 |
by Allison
This is a great poem. Keep up the great work. *5/5* |
by Loulou
THIS POEM I LOVE IT IT WON YOU 2ND PLACE IN MY CONTEST |
by Loulou
GREAT POEMS YOU R AN EXCELLENT WRITER LOVE ALWAYS |