by Drew Gold Dec 22, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Metaphoric suppositions rain down upon me, and not in the least bit am i enlightened, the day has just been brought down, a tinge darker. i find these connections that string between, uncomfortable, to say the least. what we bring to the table no longer sates our appetites and our contempt rises still. what we\'ve consumed has thus far turned around to eat it\'s way through our intentions. our hands lay perpendicular to the sky we\'ve been trying to palm, and we\'re certainly no closer. you ask for things, i\'m not so sure you\'re capable of retaining, and you definitely have the tendency of remaining still. true, you\'ve had your fill, but you\'ve exhausted your thrills. you dont even know who you are, yet your name echoes through the heads of a hundred-strong. i wonder how you escape the vibrations, and my hunger for rapture is everlasting. |
by libby
I envy your talent, prose is something I've never been able to get the hang of, for all my effort. This piece is aptly named, as well, the way your words play off each other makes them seem to be in motion - writhing. Very inspiring work. |