Hmm. Well done. Nice use of words. It flows. I love it. =) You are a good writer! Keep up the good work :) Lotsa love -xxx-

Good poem ;)

Very good. the emotions are very strongly portrayed.

5/5

This poem is very good. i like the way it flowed and it wasn't confusing very easy to read and understand.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

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