For blindness

This does remind me of E.E.Cummings poem in the word choice of not naming anyone

but otherwise it's totaly you

Alot to comprehend in such a short amount of space you've used

alot is said.
"where God's stability
that I
mirror like and quite content
reflect your I as if my own"

you reflect him in yourself the way you want him to be reflected ( if i'm reading that right)

"So I subsides in graceful mime
to you so flattered uninspired
I forget my I so immersed in your
I pulling back by exposure of self"

you show him the way you want to and the way you want to be, that you forget that thats what your doing and when you somehow pull back to see how it's going you expose parts of yourself you didn't really plan on.

"you leave me I'less so unsure of
how to view the world around me
how now I'less
I am to see?"

when that happens your looking at the world as if for the first time, and you have no idea what to think of it let alone yourself

i love this poem
amazing

I think i got the message.. i liked the way you used I throughout.. the last three lines of the second stanza seem to be the main idea, and my favorite portion.. as always you added your own originality to it, but this is pretty different from what i've read of yours.. dont have much crits but i think you spelled "uninspired" wrong.. it makes a lot of sense as i unpeel the layers, and i haven't grasped it fully but it was a good write all around..

The low rating drew me in due to peoples incoherent nature :[ nevertheless, i enjoyed yet again, another poem by you. well thought out. and i like the vast interpretations of it.

Maybe i'm wrong... O.o actually...i'm like 95% sure i'm wrong lol