This was really good, if it's true im sorry that must have hard and also kind of awkward watching your boyfriend through a window with another girl....but it was a cool story and you use really great imagery and vocab and for the most part your rhymes were good sometimes you use words that sound like they rhyme but don't really rhyme but it dosn't really matter because they still sound good i didn't like this stanza though

She should have known,
The all told her
That you didn't really
Want to hold her.

didn't flow and didn't really rhyme, technically it rhymed, but i don't really think it sounds very nice and then the last stanza threw the flow off too and i always think the ending stanza should be strong at least and i don't think you ended this as well as you could have at all but still a 5/5 great work

Great work incredible expression in your selection of words.